Hi I lloked at your action research and thought I would share the following points with you: 1. The relevancy of school uniforms vs. orchestra uniforms is not clear. 2. You mention a survey: where is this survey, where are the results in actual numbers? Where do you describe how you descided on the types of questions in the survey? 3. Your analysis is too vague: some students........some students feel......... etc. We need actual numbers. A break down of for and against per questions on the survey. Then items on the survey that might have been open ended we need a polarization chart of tendencies. Thanks Hope these comments help you to tweak your research. Adriana
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ReplyDeleteI lloked at your action research and thought I would share the following points with you:
1. The relevancy of school uniforms vs. orchestra uniforms is not clear.
2. You mention a survey: where is this survey, where are the results in actual numbers? Where do you describe how you descided on the types of questions in the survey?
3. Your analysis is too vague: some students........some students feel......... etc. We need actual numbers. A break down of for and against per questions on the survey. Then items on the survey that might have been open ended we need a polarization chart of tendencies.
Thanks
Hope these comments help you to tweak your research.
Adriana